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they look
Contributed by
amatt
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:50:00 PM in AEST
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they look
then they laugh
you look
then you get mad
you sit quietly
to scare them all
they look
then they laugh again
they are not scared
you yell and scream
they dont hear
you yell louder
they still dont hear
but they laugh
you walk away broken
but why should you care
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Re: they look
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by Twitch06 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:26:30 PM AEST
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They laugh cause ur not one of "THEM" but sometimes u just want to be noticed, and sometimes you just want to be left alone... i get that sometimes too.
I understand completely
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Re: they look
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:25:56 AM AEST
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I understand also. This was an excellent write. I liked it a lot. Good job.
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Re: they look
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by bonita2689 on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 09:43:01 PM AEST
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Simple, I think a bit too simple...
I understnad your intentions with this poem but then I think the simplicity tears away the strength of this poem
I think you should have made it more descriptive
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