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Complacence
Contributed by
kyletycz
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:26:48 PM in AEST
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Im not happy or sad
Neither good nor bad
Im not cheerful or smiling
Neither cheeting nor lying
Im complacent
I dont correct or achieve
I dont direct nor mislead
I dont cheer or cry
I dont give up nor try
Im complacent
Im not beutiful or ugly
Im not skinny nor pudgey
I dont pester or impair
I dont speak nor dare
Im complacent
Complacence isnt a thing of glory
It can become something rather gory
When you neither want, nor do care
No one will want you there
Complacence distances me from others
My relationships are what it smothers
to live and not care, not somthing for to strive
Because then, will you truly be, truly alive?
Complacence isnt my first choice
It just became my single voice
Now I walk the earth alone
Complacent with no one
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-11-14 19:26:48]
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Re: Complacence
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by namesaretaken on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 07:39:56 PM AEST
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That was an awsome write
I loved every bit of it!
Complacencey can be a very dangerous thing if it is felt on a mass level
Good stuff
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Re: Complacence
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:26:25 PM AEST
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I know the feeling....awesome write....great job
Lots of Love
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Re: Complacence
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by Red_October on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:01:46 PM AEST
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| I like the flow of this poem. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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