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Apathy
Contributed by
luna_mica
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:09:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'll never be mistaken
For someone really beautiful.
The girls say they are taken
By someone rich and powerful.
I'm just a big nobody
Who has nowhere to go to.
You're my only somebody
But I've got nothing to show you.
I've become so out of it
That I just space out all the time.
My idea bulb is dimly lit
And I'm asleep from ten to nine.
Life is just one pointless bore
Without a rhyme or a reason
It even feels like such a chore
To watch the changing seasons.
My apathy is killing me,
Choking out my weakened soul.
The empathy is still in me,
Preventing me from being whole.
I need to change, be stronger
And wake up from this vision.
Please stay with me longer
Until I make my decision.
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luna_mica
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2004-11-14 21:09:39]
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Re: Apathy
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:12:26 PM AEST
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| I really like the poem. Though I think it needs a little help making it flow better. |
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