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Heaven
Contributed by
ETrojan08
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Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:02:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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Theres that place
That place we all know about
That place we all wanna go
That place that seems so rite
That big place in the sky
That holy place
That place that is full of love
The place where everyone loves you
The place where there is no pain
The place where heartbreak doesnt exist
The place where you will face the creator
The place we all call heaven
Heaven the place we all wanna go
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Re: Heaven
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:22:12 PM AEST
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| Well said... Well written... Well done... Great poem you have here pal! Way to go! |
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Re: Heaven
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by girish on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:19:52 AM AEST
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good thoughts expressed nice. but even the heaven can be experienced here if we all maintain peace. here in this site itself is heaven if we all write and read such poems.
good write
I have given a few pieces the same way
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