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Seven Seconds of Sin
Contributed by
Mangs
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:55:49 AM in AEST
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Seven Seconds of sin,
A single glance and a helpless 'give in'.
A costly mistake and behold....
The goddamn devil took my soul.
There she was...a lucky roll of the dice,
Like a hundred year old wine put on ice.
Sophisticated mind and scantily clad,
in a piece of fiber that was driving me mad.
Shining like a constellation in the twilight sky,
A stunning presence that makes the mind go awry.
She cast an eye on me with descending grace,
The princess put the pauper in his place.
Me, her and the cursed twilight...
All together...all alone.
And in a mad dash,
I rushed and caught...
Nay, I caught not Ophelia's cold hand in her dark grave...
But a running omnibus to a happier place.
Copyright ©
Mangs
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2004-11-15 00:55:49]
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Re: Seven Seconds of Sin
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by SoRrYifOrGot2SMiLe on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:23:39 AM AEST
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| Profound with excellent structure....fantastic, phenomenal,, articulate....awesome comes to mind, keep it up you made my day. |
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Re: Seven Seconds of Sin
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:30:34 AM AEST
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Wow that was a good write, i love the flow of your ryming.
Hugs,
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Re: Seven Seconds of Sin
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by pixie on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:40:14 AM AEST
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a very good write,Mangs and welcome to YPDC
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Seven Seconds of Sin
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by little_genna on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:28:26 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed the flow of this piece.
It has an interestingly deep story to tell,
I look forward to readin more of your stuff.
take care
Gen xx |
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