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It comes while we're sleeping...
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:02:02 PM in AEST
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Unavoidable and constant nightmare...
Leave me be this one night, cant I sleep without you?
I've seen her face, cried tears for this nightmare so close to home.
I've seen that look... the look she gives when I know she needs me.
I've felt the tears... the tears burning all the way down.
You've made my mind a place I fear.
Too scared to close my eyes and see what you've got waiting.
A nightmare that never ends, a nightmare that crosses into reality.
Waiting and stalking, unavoidable and constant.
What I fear is what I love - and I don't want to dream it no more.
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Re: It comes while we're sleeping...
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by momentoftruth on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:12:21 PM AEST
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| Amazing poem...I can really relate to this one. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: It comes while we're sleeping...
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by travisk on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:15:13 PM AEST
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very good job, but "anymore" might be better
the relation to general struggles in my own life is very present |
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Re: It comes while we're sleeping...
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by jace on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:51:20 AM AEST
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| Very descriptive I love it |
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