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Forever
Contributed by
surge_joebot
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:03:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Forever and always mine.
Always in my dreams.
The only thing that I wish for.
My everything and so much more...
Forever and always crying.
Tears for no reason.
Crying because I need to.
Pouring unrenlentlessly always...
Forever and always lying.
Keeping secrets from myself.
Unable to handle the truth.
Soffocating in my man made lies...
Forever and always me.
Emotions always so high.
Following this dark path to nowhere.
Me in every sence of the word.
Forever and always forver.
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surge_joebot
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2004-11-15 14:03:18]
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Re: Forever
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:21:43 PM AEST
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I'm not at all sure of what your talking about.
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Re: Forever
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:32:38 AM AEST
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I think its the first paragraph that threw me off, it doesn't fit in with the rest of the poem if it is you that you are talking about.. this was very hard to understand, nice structure though. Good try.
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