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Just another scar on my arm
Contributed by
Nezenic
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:36:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crying and staring at these scars
Why did I cut my arm and carve?
And why will I continue this?
My life is not what I call bliss
Many problems, too many tears
Wishing for the sight of you, here
I'm happy if I close my eyes
So I can just break down and cry
Why are these feelings so damn strong?
It was not right, how was it wrong?
I sit here and stare at my scars
Crave to carve your name in my arm
Why did you have to waste my time?
I cannot sleep, I weep all night
Can't figure out, what did you do?
Do you think I'd do this to you?
You're my world, you're my life and thoughts
You're the only person I've sought
Hush, now, please, I don't want to cry
'Cause I'll be okay when I die
And after death where will I go?
To escape this feeling and grope?
Without you, life is meaningless
I failed, God put me to the test
Little angel, that's what you are
Just another scar on my arm
Pretty lady, my tears turn red
Color of my wrist when it bled
I'll be okay, soon I'll be gone
I still think I was never wrong
Pretty lady, shoot this gunshot
So that I can feel my life drop
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Nezenic
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Re: Just another scar on my arm
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:39:31 PM AEST
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| I know Another who bears those scars along with you... Who will bear them for you... |
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Re: Just another scar on my arm
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by blackholesun on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:03:21 PM AEST
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| i really feel for you,it sounds like how i have felt and feel allot in my new`relationship but im trying to figure out how to deal with him not being everything that i expected,like romantic and caring,i find that thegood people of your poetry .com are always relating to me,because there are people here with the same feelings,we are always helping eachother.i always write about my feelings with my bf it lets it out.keep up the good work and always vent! |
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Re: Just another scar on my arm
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:36:35 PM AEST
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i know lots of people who share your scars and problems. i agree, the writers on your.poetry.com all help eachother, in one way or another. so hang in there and remember you're not alone. nice write
the raven |
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Re: Just another scar on my arm
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:40:01 AM AEST
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Awsome write, I find scars of the body nothing compared to scars of the mind, and when the scars of the mind move themselves to the body like your poem describes, then you need to let it out, and keep your mind from scaring your body, loved this poem lots
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Re: Just another scar on my arm
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:26:06 AM AEST
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vivd, deep and emotional, well expressed poem of pain, i hope that one day your pain will stop,
pixie xx |
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