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010100110100010101011000
Contributed by
summers
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:58:44 PM in AEST
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marching like ants
in magnified sunlight
we are all hurrying to our deaths
i lit a cigarette in the midwest
and flicked it three towns over
to watch a city burn to the ground
and wash away in an undertow
when the world ends
i want to have a front row seat.
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summers
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2004-11-15 15:58:44]
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by surge_joebot on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:11:57 PM AEST
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I liked that poem, especially the end and the title, very audience capturing, good stuff
cheers
Demelza |
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by summers on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:24:30 PM AEST
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thank you.
completely unrelated to the poem, the title is binary for "SEX" |
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:35:08 PM AEST
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Just like me - I'll be sitting close by right then.
I once got attacked by a glue-sniffer, insisting that 'it was all about the 1's and the 0's' ' He also claimed to be the 'Voice of the Mysterons'.
Ah, streetlife . . .
Truly enjoyable read. Well done. |
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:12:06 PM AEST
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Excellent!
And me having studied Binary, too. I'd go computationally figure that out, but I can't be ***** and I trust you anyways . . .
Well done.
N_F
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by Delmina on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:01:02 PM AEST
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| Terrific! In it's briefness it encapsulates the don't give a damn attitude and outlook of the world's finality. |
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:35:36 AM AEST
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short and sweet, i like it
l8r
Ninja Tycz |
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:48:54 AM AEST
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I like this! It reminds me of a poem that I adore. The poem's appeal is rooted in the fact that it takes my brain out for a walk every time I read it. This... has that same sort of effect.
Nice done - and welcome to YPDC!
~ SNM |
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Re: 010100110100010101011000
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:17:50 AM AEST
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| I love this poem... great job! |
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