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Bleeding White Angels
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:29:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sharp edges of your fangs are glistening
While white Angels stand listening
They are so pure, so light, so clean
Looking upon your leftover death scenes
They want to burn you,
to ignite your pale skin
They want to cleanse you,
Of your blood red evil sins
You notice their stares
Hardly give a care
For you slink up behind with stealth so elite
And plant in your fangs....your bite mark so neat
And now they have turned from innocent creatures
To the very thing that has haunted their features
Poor little Angels,
God's own peaceful whispers
Corrupted with hatred.....now death are their blisters
The vampire, so proud
Hisses aloud
But in the end, the demon knows
that God will prevail
And strike a champion's pose
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2004-11-15 16:29:02]
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Re: Bleeding White Angels
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by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:40:05 PM AEST
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| very dark and well written..very creative keep up the great writing |
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Re: Bleeding White Angels
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by brokenbylove130 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:59:16 PM AEST
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i absolutely love vampires and although as you said this is a negative view of them, its still awsome. the whole vampire thing as always facinated me ever since i was a little girl. this was a great write
~much love~
~mandi~ |
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Re: Bleeding White Angels
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:02:57 PM AEST
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very vivid and well written I thought with a
good message as well.
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Re: Bleeding White Angels
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by CrimsonTears on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:51:28 PM AEST
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i love vampires..this is a great write....i like it alot...great job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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