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I was reminded
Contributed by
rhef3
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:09:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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As we lay there quiet
I was reminded of all the reasons why I lust you
Your smile,
and the way it teased at me seductively
Your laugh,
and the way it tempted me
Your eyes,
and the way they seem to hypnotize me
As we sat there silent
I was reminded of all the reasons why I love you
Your smile,
and the way it brings such life into me
Your laugh,
and the way it makes everything okay
Your eyes,
and the way they seem to read my thoughts
As we stand here now
I am reminded of all the reasons why I hate you
Your smile,
and the way it confuses me
Your laugh,
and the way it seems to mock me
Your eyes,
and the way they can look into mine and not feel a thing
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2004-11-15 17:09:44]
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Re: I was reminded
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by sunshiny on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:26:17 PM AEST
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| Great work. I think it portrays how a relationship changes from lust to love to hate and how we take things for granted. Also how at one time we loved the things people did, only to hate them later. Neat! |
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