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In Loving Memory
Contributed by
Kericka
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:38:53 PM in AEST
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A year has passed since the day I saw you last, since your death tears have been cried, memories flood from the past. Today the day of my birth is the same day you left this earth, it's hard to celebrate and mourn, you are gone, did you know your worth? I await the day I will see you again, I'll give you a big hug and tears of joy will begin. It was funny how we met when I think back, jumping into the middle of your quarrel before you were about to attack. From that day on in the hall we'd stop and talk, you always knew when things were wrong and gave me a hug, to class we'd walk. You almost always had a big grin on your face, you had such a great heart, great personality, nothing too far from grace.
Dedicated to Brendan M. Kaase
Febuary 10, 1988
November 23, 2003
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Kericka
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2004-11-15 18:38:53]
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Re: In Loving Memory
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by SuicideParty on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:59:52 PM AEST
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Touching. Emotional. Great feeling.
I liked it. It had it's flaws, but hey, what doesn't. Sort of choppy, and you maybe shouldn't try so hard to make things rhyme. Really, some of the best works out there are free form. But I suppose whatever works best for you works best for you.
Really though, it was quite touching, and I am sorry for your loss and the loss of all those that loved him. |
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Re: In Loving Memory
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:20:38 AM AEST
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awww that was really deep and moving, I am sorry for the loss of your friend,
pixie xx |
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Re: In Loving Memory
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by CherylMoore on
Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 01:54:08 PM AEST
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Hi Kericka!
My name is Cheryl - I'm Brendan's mom. I found your poem today. It means so much to me to read it. You write so beautifully!! I wanted to know if I could post it on Brendan's website (brendankaase.com). Please email me at mysonbrendan@hotmail.com if I can, and please sign your name to it if you'd like. You should be very proud of how well you write your poetry.
Love,
Cheryl |
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