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Forever Remain A Child
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:21:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The innocence of childhood just vanished out the door,
I wish that I could go back for just a little while more,
Things were just so easy then and not like they are now,
I wish there was a way to re-visit it all somehow,
But the world isn't as bright and playfull as it was,
I suffer in this darkness and not needlessly but because,
It was so much easier to play with my collection of toys,
Instead of having my heart broken and shattered by boys,
But I will hold on and remain strong because it's what I do,
And I will never change for anyone, speciffically even you,
Suffering a scraped knee was really so much less harm,
Than the scars that I make myself, here upon my arm,
My biggest problem then was what barbie I'd get next,
But now im debating these thoughts that are too complex,
I want the innocence back and rid of all these evil sins,
Turn back the hands of time to where it all begins,
Erase all the hatred that spawned into my mind,
Get rid of the negative thoughts and leave it all behind,
I wish I could fix these feelings, get them sorted and filed,
I just wish that I could go back, Cuz I'd forever remain a child.
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2004-11-15 19:21:26]
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Re: Forever Remain A Child
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:36:21 PM AEST
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| INCREDIBLE POEM!! You write in such a similar way that I do! You really expressed your emotions well here, and I am feeling the SAME WAY YOU ARE!! Please feel free to talk to me, I think we'd have A LOT in common. I wish so bad I could be three again, oh how innocent those times were. it's okay, we can make it through these sh*t hole teenage years together! I'm always here to help and listen! my email is mkjsoccer4life@hotmail.com and the sn is maryjane4484. plz don't hesitate to talk! |
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Re: Forever Remain A Child
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by Dstar on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:41:54 PM AEST
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| wow i love this write. You showed your emotions so deeply it was great and just awesome. I felt these emotions reading it and i have alot of the same feelings. If you need someone to talk to im here my aol name is Dstar3823 you can email me or i.m. me if you want. Love the poem keep writing and keep your head up. |
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