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Amber Like Embers
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I met a girl
That played
A walking whisper
Within my dreams
Until Charley
Stole that sweet voice
Away from me
Amber stings like embers
Brown and beautiful
Im broken
And my heart has been taken
Into the reflection
That Ive seen
This girl became
A fleeting ripple
Within the ocean
She became
A mirror that reflects
Only the purest emotions
And this girl
Has taken all of me
I met a girl
That brings
The best of memories
And now Im not sure
If well ever meet
But to this day
And any other
Ill speak her name
As if my lover
Amber
Sweet embers
Burning me forever
How could I ever
Let you leave
How could you ever
Stray from me...
... I think I LOVE you
Copyright ©
Diatribe
... [
2004-11-15 20:11:00]
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Re: Amber Like Embers
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by sweetdreamsaremadeofthis on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 09:10:38 PM AEST
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| Very powerful! Great job! |
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Re: Amber Like Embers
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by DesperateSoul on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:57:21 PM AEST
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| OOOH! I know this feeling so well!! It;s like fishing,the biggest best ones always get away!! Keep fishing!!! Keep writing always!!! Great Write!! D.$. |
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Re: Amber Like Embers
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:15:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful.
I found these words very captivating... |
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