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Blank Mind
Contributed by
Blue
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the knife it slipped from bleeding hands
i could not bleed enough
I cried myself to sleep each night
my life was just too tough
and here i was at life's end
my mind completely blank
my blood spilling out on dark red sheets
into the black i sank
the tongues that slashed at my mind
now suddenly disappeared
but it was too late to save myself
i had given into fear
the blood was just so beautiful
my mind was just too blank
numb i sat in silence
into the murk i sank
i woke up the next morning
blood fresh upon my face
i washed the sheets myself that day
and bleached the pillowcase
with mind so numb i could not think
i fumbled through my life
trying hard to ignore the siren song
of the still-bloody knife
Copyright ©
Blue
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2002-11-21 12:20:00]
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Re: Blank Mind
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by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 03:44:00 PM AEST
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To most this would be sad..but i think this is so beautiful. It's beautiful vision that you gave in this poem, Thank you for sharing this one, I enjoyed it more than you could possibly know.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Blank Mind
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by Merd on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 10:06:30 AM AEST
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| hmmm, wow. that's pretty much all I've really got to say. It's amazing, though however depressing it is, it's also beautiful, but in a different sense as a flower is beautiful, or a butterfly. Somehow it shows beauty in pain, though through that pain there is also a sadness that cannot you cannot let others know of what happened. |
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Re: Blank Mind
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by Rage on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 12:41:14 PM AEST
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Wow, Marisa, this is another masterpiece. I also agree with the above comments. It's just simply beautiful. I can't think of anything else, but how much pain there is, but colored with beauty. Wonderful work, Marisa. Please don't let it be true, Darling. Love ya' lotts.
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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