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pain
Contributed by
amatt
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:05:36 PM in AEST
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its the thing you cant escape
its the thing that lasts in your soul
it reminds you everyday
it tells you everything you dont want to know
it plays evil tricks
it knows you darkest lies
it tells you them all to you
its called pain
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Re: pain
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by VonDutchChick08 on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:10:53 PM AEST
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| It's a short poem, but right to the point. This is a good poem. Keep on writing! |
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Re: pain
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by Aquaelius on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:15:52 PM AEST
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| very direct... thatnks for sharing. |
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Re: pain
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by DesperateSoul on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:53:55 PM AEST
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It fills my life and has since my earliest memories!!! Great Write!! Thanks 4 sharing!!
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Re: pain
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by sabrina on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:14:35 PM AEST
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I like that it is direct and short but sweet....
Good job
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Re: pain
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by Twitch06 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:34:18 PM AEST
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I like this poem as well. I like how it states your fears, and concerns with your conscience and makes you somewhat paranoid.. very deep, keep goin with your riting
Kristen |
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