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killing them
Contributed by
serena
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:29:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Living like an android
In the oppressed realm of the vain
To the evil, malevolent thoughts
Lingering inside my head,
I am an eternal slave.
I bless my throat with a knife
And silence my evil, black heart
with this instrument of sin.
Copyright ©
serena
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2004-11-16 00:29:42]
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Re: killing them
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:42:57 AM AEST
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| Damn thats really good! not a bunch to read through, lots going on. good stuff! Crow |
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Re: killing them
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:51:41 AM AEST
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nice write, direct and to the point,
l8r
Ninja Tycz |
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Re: killing them
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:03:39 AM AEST
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Ohhh I like this one, short but sweet. I've read it three times and I still want to read it again lol. Great Write
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: killing them
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:33:09 PM AEST
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| well written and well expressed...very short and to the point...i enjoyed it very much |
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Re: killing them
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by notwhatitseems on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:20:43 AM AEST
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| I like it short but full of feeling |
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