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A Door to Doors
Contributed by
kyletycz
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:26:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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A door
No floor
White room
Curiosity blooms
This door proped up in front of me
Nothing left nothing right
Endless nothing all in white
I walk past the door to the other side
Not through but arround the door of pine
Once I walk past theres the other side
What is this door carved with pride?
I open expecting to see what was already seen
But to another place where I have not been
Is where that mighty door did open
A fantastic discovery is what I was hopin
Many doors arround the first
Curiosity gained new thirst
This new place all draped in white
A hallway of doors cloacked in light
Where do they go?
From where did they come?
A magical place for me
A wonderous place meant for one
This alcove of doors
They open not to a land afar
But a past, my past
Knocking me ajar
I see what was already seen
In these doors
My memories
I find myself traveling the path
I have traveled once before
It seems so distant
Yet exciting to explore
I see things and laugh
I remember times and cry
I open every single door
Never questioning why
This room of my life
Doors to my past
And the hallway doesnt end
No door is last
So I keep opening and closing
Never waining in my mission
Every single door
Never missin
Then I turn a knob,
Not ready to flee
And I see myself looking in
Staring back at me
I wonder what this could have meant
This door must be for the present
I am staring at my time in this hallway of thought
And remember the emotions it brought
The rest of the knobs turn
Turn, but do not budge
So I tell myself they are for tomarow
And hope they will contain much
This wonderous place
I hope to probe once again
To see all of my life
From here, from there, from then
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-11-16 01:26:14]
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Re: A Door to Doors
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:32:01 AM AEST
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This is truly brilliant!!! It confused me a little at first but I think that was just me being slow. I love this, very thought provoking.
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Re: A Door to Doors
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by aprild on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:53:50 AM AEST
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This is one of the best poems that my eyes
have come across tonite. Very creative |
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Re: A Door to Doors
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:51:56 AM AEST
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That was excellent, this is so mysterious i love it.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: A Door to Doors
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by lovesucks on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:07:22 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved this piece and it gave me such a mysterious but warming feeling inside to look back at things done in the past with such open-mindedness, wow awesome. Thank you for sharing.
T |
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Re: A Door to Doors
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:20:45 PM AEST
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| great job!! very cool read not to long at all, could have read more..Crow |
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