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Talking to the Mirror
Contributed by
justjonesy
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:48:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Will I?
Why ask?
"You don't
love for ever."
That is why she
isnt looking.
"Good.".....
...............
...Good looking
isn't she?
"Why is that
ever for love?"
Dont you
ask why?
"I will.".
Copyright ©
justjonesy
... [
2004-11-16 01:48:50]
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Re: Talking to the Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:53:54 AM AEST
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This one is really creative, I love it. I've read it three times already, it really makes on think. Very well written
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Re: Talking to the Mirror
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:58:08 AM AEST
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very well written one that makes you think good job keep it up...
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Re: Talking to the Mirror
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:08:19 AM AEST
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thats crazy tripppy style, i love it, awsome job, never have i seen anything that wonderfully abstract written so well.... a good mental voyage
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