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slowly
Contributed by
Keila
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:03:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness crawls upon me,
comforting and warm.
this darkness lives inside me,
and heals my aching heart.
slowly this darkness shows me,
what i need to know.
this darkness teaches me slowly,
what it means to die.
slowly it can show me how i make you cry,
this comforting evil,
slowly eats my soul.
devouring my sanity,
slowly so slowly,
too slowly.
Copyright ©
Keila
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2004-11-16 09:03:53]
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Re: slowly
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:07:22 AM AEST
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very dark and deep,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: slowly
(User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 05:29:15 PM AEST
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Oooh, that's kinda creepy! It's really good! Keep it up!
-Drapes |
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