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slowly
Contributed by
Keila
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:13:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkness crawls upon me,
comforting and warm.
this darkness lives inside me,
and heals my aching heart.
slowly this darkness shows me,
what i need to know.
this darkness teaches me slowly,
what it means to die.
slowly it can show me how i make you cry,
this comforting evil,
slowly eats my soul.
devouring my sanity,
slowly so slowly.
Copyright ©
Keila
... [
2004-11-16 09:13:43]
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Re: slowly
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by Mihiri on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:26:09 AM AEST
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Very dark, yet u don't swathe the whole verse with it. Very nicely rounded.. But dark! hehehe!
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Re: slowly
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:27:21 AM AEST
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A beautifully moving write with strong emotions. Very well written
Take Care
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Re: slowly
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by HellsLibrarian on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:59:35 PM AEST
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| so, this is where the dark comes out, hiding behind the bubbly. |
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