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TIME
Contributed by
Red_October
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I capture minutes blown away in the wind
Time passes, but I remember them
Rewind and replay
Covered in them, making them stay
They say
Time is nobody's friend
We all lose the moments in the end
I wonder if I write them down, will I win?
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2004-11-16 14:08:16]
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Re: TIME
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:23:55 PM AEST
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Re: TIME
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:10:22 AM AEST
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Diaries are indeed a source of inspiration.
Time is captured by them, as in your poem.
Well written, Tiffany. |
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