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The waiting
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He let fall
the world of the
sweet girl,
she cried for years
picking up
pieces of herself.
"Why,why
waiting?"
she asked herself
everyday.
"Why,why
not now?"
she shouted to the
defeated sky.
The waiting
hurted her heart,
a dagger,
that pained her,
and the face of him
in her head,
smiling,indifferent.
The pieces were scattered
everywhere
and the sweet,
thin-handed girl
picked them up,
picked them up.
Copyright ©
LostDream
... [
2002-11-21 16:00:00]
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Re: The waiting
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:37:00 PM AEST
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I never really understood
why people make other people
wait for things when it comes
to love when all it does is hurt
them and harm the relationship
Thanks for sharing this one i
enjoyed it alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The waiting
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by juliette on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 08:26:13 AM AEST
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True we are all just waiting,waiting......on something or everything. I loved this one! Good Job!
*Juliette |
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