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always behind
Contributed by
elatednbliss
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 04:16:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The fact that I'm committed
disqust me...
I'm like bubbly puppy
prancing about loyally
after my hearts keeper...
While they keep walking on
never glancing back at me
So I follow in their footsteps
and keep their shadow as my
company...
And when I finally think
I have a minute to rest
you tug on that leash
and yank me yet again
So I keep on behind you
forever looking at your past
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elatednbliss
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2004-11-16 16:16:00]
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Re: always behind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:06:51 PM AEST
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| Aw. Sad write. Is that why they call it puppy love? Anyway, it tells the story well. Cheers! |
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Re: always behind
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by Sinned on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 01:17:31 PM AEST
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A novality cute move on forget looking at his past. good poem
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