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Nothing is as it Seems
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:04:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Within this small town joy and happiness is found
Vibrant, bright flowers spring up from the ground
Children dash through the vast, open plains
All feelings of hate have seemed to be drained
Smiles are plastered on the peoples bright faces
While small animals run through the wide open spaces
Families gather together for a great dinner feast
No commotion or anger all is at peace
The people in town care for each one and all
They help others up when theyve taken a fall
Families love and cherish each other
The community is everyones sister or brother
Yet all this changes when the sun descend down
The smiles have faded and turned into frowns
The vibrant, bright flowers wither and die
All the small little children soon start to cry
And all the animals soon run wild in wrath
Destroying all that comes in their path
Within the families anger starts to emerge
Screaming and fighting push them to their verge
Hatred soon dominates the peoples cold hearts
Friends and families soon drift apart
Darkness cast its everlasting shadow below
Effecting them more then theyd ever know
Yet the sun soon rises into the sky
And they go back to living their lifes of lie
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2004-11-16 17:04:53]
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Re: Nothing is as it Seems
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by cocacola1331 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:34:02 PM AEST
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| There's always a twist to your poems... but that's a good thing. I started reading it, and I was thinking, 'Oh, maybe she's going for a happier-tone....' then I remembered that title and knew it would have a pretty dark twist to it. I like reading your poems, Dev, they're great. Keep posting, it was a very good write. |
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