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My Hell
Contributed by
crash
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:06:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This is hell
This is pain
I'm feeling down
so let it rain
I'm feeling pain
I'm fleeing happyness
I look at my life
What a mess!
My pains
I cannot hide
even though
there's life inside
What I need
is to be well
so I can deal
With my hell
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crash
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2004-11-16 17:06:07]
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Re: My Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:19:32 AM AEST
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| An emotional yet dark moving piece. Very good. |
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Re: My Hell
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by Chaos_is_apon_us on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:21:04 AM AEST
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Stepping off from mainstream to deal with your own demons is the best way to do it. I loved this work
Better dayz
~jace~ |
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