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Black & White
Contributed by
thepos
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:30:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black & White
Some people say they want to die,
They think it would be better.
When I here these words they say,
My blood grows even redder.
They don't even know what it's like,
No one does in all mankind.
I know and I've found,
What many has seeked to find.
I know what death feels like,
I know that death is real.
It is very hard to explain,
I can't discribe death's feel.
I know what happen after death,
I won't tell you it's dread.
Which is why the reason I choose to die,
With these secrets in my head.
If I told you or any one,
What happens when you die.
You would either think I"m crazy,
Or do nothing but cry.
It is such a bade time,
As I hold this knife.
But if I told someone,
It would ruin all your lives.
I won't give you a hint,
Or a single clue.
I won't tell you if it's good or bad,
Or when it will happen to you.
I do know when death is near,
I know on who it stalks.
I fear the worst for that person,
But on death I'll never talk.
I hate to know who will die,
I will feel all their pain.
Then when their time is over,
My tears fall like rain.
I will cry when I'm happy,
I will cry when I'm asleep.
I'll even cry when I'm having fun,
I know the shadow of death will creep.
Now this poem will go on forever,
I will always have my breath.
For I will always be alive,
As long as there is death.
--Evan L.--
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Re: Black & White
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by EternalNight4x on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:23:49 PM AEST
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| very well expressed and well written...good choice with words and im not sure why but I really enjoyed this poem...keep posting |
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Re: Black & White
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by Hollie85 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:31:24 PM AEST
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| I really like the perspective you write from - very creative and fantastic writing. Keep posting! |
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Re: Black & White
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by thepos on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:03:53 PM AEST
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| thx. I'll keep posting. |
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Re: Black & White
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:29:35 PM AEST
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| This is great! it has the right words and the right flow, not to mention how deep it is. I must go check out your website. |
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Re: Black & White
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by Dominick-Destruction on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:45:47 AM AEST
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Fantastic write...
Death is...Only an exit to somewhere new...A beginging...
But suicide is for the weak......Fight for every last breath....
xDDx |
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