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Her Hell
Contributed by
witch_derna
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:03:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She just wishes to stop the pain
This hell she feels inside day and again
Inside she feels she's failing
Failing everyone and everything
So she cuts her flesh to feel some ease
Free from her torment and her disease
How many cuts must she do
For all the pain to for once be through
Her blood spilling usually helps it
But this time it didn't
She decides to go deeper this time
Maybe just one more line
Before she realizes it's to late
She met her maker on this date
Copyright ©
witch_derna
... [
2004-11-16 18:03:15]
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Re: Her Hell
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:32:33 PM AEST
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ooo spifftacular! I like-y! Very dark in it's simplicity! *hugs*
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Re: Her Hell
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:54:12 PM AEST
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Very dark and emotional.. i hate for anyone to put theirself through so much inflicted pain.. i myself know how it feels.. its un-needed stress.. certainly makes for a powerful write though..
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Re: Her Hell
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:27:05 PM AEST
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I agree.
It's a pretty good poem.
Nice work.
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Re: Her Hell
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 09:09:56 PM AEST
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Her hell is like that of so many that cut. The pain the hurt the anger the lonelyness. Most cutters feel inside. I can feel your words as if they were my own. I have seen your scars. and they are beautiful to me. And hopefully together we will over come this. The cutters way.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Her Hell
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:26:24 AM AEST
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a well expressed poem of pure pain, hope it eases for you soon,
pixie xx |
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