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pop goes the poem
Contributed by
timmy2scoops
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:19:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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pop goes the weasle pop goes the corn pop goes the ballon i see devil horns dark and wet in a stolen vet drivein real crazy went into the store the booze made me hazzy ate the weasle feelin lazy i miss my ballon my lips are achy i need my corn left the vet i seen the devil i bluffed his bet now i wear the horns and use them for good i scared a few people so i wore a hood pop off 2 work pop off 2 bed its friday pop goes my check what the heck???
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Re: pop goes the poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by namesaretaken on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:51:54 AM AEST (User
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This poem really expresses the randomness of thought but it kind of came together
I really liked the last few lines
pop off 2 work
pop off 2 bed
its friday
pop goes my check
what the heck???
I know that feeling all to well
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Re: pop goes the poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by mysticpoet on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:56:17 AM AEST (User
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I think your poem is cool, made me laugh.
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