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I Have A Teddy Bear
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:13:40 AM in AEST
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I have a teddy bear,
But I really wish it wasnt there,
It has such evil, hallow eyes,
At night I hear my other dolls cry.
They say hes evil & he inflicts pain,
But he swears to me that hes quite sane,
I found one dolly without her head,
Teddy swears that he was asleep in bed.
I try to stay awake at night,
To try & catch them in mid fight,
But it always happens when I am asleep,
Never do I hear my dollys as they weep.
I once found him leaning over me,
I think I saw a knife, but it was too dark to see,
I feel him staring at me in the dark,
Im sure on my throat hed love to make his mark.
I get so scared I lay there so very still,
Im sure that my teddy is mentally ill,
Why cant my teddy be like all the rest?
Im sure one day murder he will confess.
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:16:29 AM AEST
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*grins*
Hun, this is not silly at all.
In fact, I love it. lol. I think it's a new favourite.
*giggles*
The poor dolls. lol
*hugs you tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:34:00 AM AEST
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Oh those poor dolly's,
I hope you put her head back on.
*giggles*
that was a cool write,
I liked that one alot.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by sean88 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:39:19 AM AEST
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lovely poem...strange topic but thats what made me like it so much!
great work! well done!
sean xx
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:56:06 AM AEST
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This is amazing.....
I am so glad I have a good imagination!
This may seem a little morbid but i LOVE it.
take care
Gen xx |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by Mangs on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:57:57 AM AEST
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unusual topic...but a really good write...
Im never lookin at teddies the same way again... ;-) |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:55:21 PM AEST
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Chucky the teddy bear lol
He sleeps in the back room from now on.
Brilliant Pixie
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:20:38 PM AEST
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| OOOOOO I love this write. WOW! Excellent write pixie. Scary. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:50:22 PM AEST
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Such a deep expression of a personal hell. This deamon that lives within your thoughts. May you win the battle and cut the teddy bear apart.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:53:42 PM AEST
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reminds me of my evil shirley temple doll when i was just a lass......i say we kick both hers and teddy's scrawny ........
all puns aside....the imagination is a morbid beautiful thing....and i just love yours when you share it with us......good work girl!!!!! |
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Re: I Have A Teddy Bear
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by sunshiny on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:34:48 PM AEST
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| Great imagination. You should think of writing a book....lol. Thanks! |
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