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The reality of my fatality
Contributed by
BlindSuicide
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:55:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Alone what does that mean to me?
It means sad lonely nights crying endlessly
Stuffing your feelings deep inside
Finding a place inside yourself to run and hide
Drowing yourself in tears
Cowering away and avoiding your fears
Closing off any path exposing the pain you conceal
Not being able to find any connections to feeling real
Letting the poision run through your veins
Shutting out any possiblities to ever being sane
Losing all feelings to everything that was at one point alive
Wanting to climb the highest building on earth just to dive
Looking for a solution to stop the poision from flowing
Knowing it will never stop going
Wanting so badly to reach the end
Just to find it's starting all over again
Praying till blue in the face
Disappearing for days at a time without a trace
Digging a hole deeper than a grave
Seeing there is no chance for ever being saved
Finally opening your eyes to reality
Realizing this is your end and the beginning of your fatality
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BlindSuicide
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2004-11-17 12:55:54]
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Re: The reality of my fatality
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by LEMMEN on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:13:10 PM AEST
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Nicely written. So many of your words hit home to me in my own life and with the posin that lives within. I just hope your doing better releasing the pain by writing it down for all the world to see. "GREAT WRITE" BlindSuicide.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: The reality of my fatality
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:21:58 PM AEST
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Very heart wrenching, sad and beautiful. Bravo!
Laurie |
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Re: The reality of my fatality
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:27:05 PM AEST
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awwww that was so sad, vivid with expression, you made me feel how you felt,
*hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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