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Your Stray Bullet
Contributed by
justjonesy
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:13:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Last night we put on the cruise control
...switched on the autopilot
Travelled thru the night
just me and you
and the moon overhead
Caught by your stray bullet
I lost sight and direction
Caught by your stray bullet
I found a connection
We were in the presence of memories
flashing pictures
capturing moments
In a perfect world
there was no timeframe
In a perfect world
tomorrow will never have came
Now here I sit today
empty room......me and my pen
Diggin myself deeper
my words are always free
Digging myself deeper
It's so typical of me
Back at the start
I'm pushing away
I hope you kept a place in memory
I'll be here
but keeping hope is tought
I'll be here
when will that be enough
Copyright ©
justjonesy
... [
2004-11-17 17:13:49]
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Re: Your Stray Bullet
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by Spike on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:24:17 AM AEST
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Hmmm... this is pretty impressive, and very close to song lyrics. Sad, beautiful. I really like love poetry that has the heart in purgatory and the head filled with mystery - it really lifts us beyond our physical selves into the realm of the metaphysical. I was touched.
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