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Dear God, I Will Live This Nevermore.
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:23:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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a zombie i am, for the walking dead is who i be
lingering sadness and the futile depth of my soul
take me from this horrible time of depression and sin
pull me from this evilness that breaths within me
it feeds off my soul,
feasting off my dark thoughts
so hold this gun, to my head
and wait for the solaice
Dear God, why me?
what have i done wrong? what have i done to deserve this early death?
feel your touch, Nevermore.
to witness the bright glow of day.
for peace to return my tormented soul
for my tortured body to lay at rest
now please, don't look at me like that
this is my decision my choice.
i was over denided of my entrance to passion
i am never to be complete
my fate sealed with this single resounding shot
my restless soul to stir no more, and the din of voice's never to be heard again.
Dear God,
I am to live this life, Nevermore.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2004-11-17 18:23:02]
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Re: Dear God, I Will Live This Nevermore.
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:49:57 PM AEST
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Very strong write, great job tho, i liked it a lot and cud relate a bit as well
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: Dear God, I Will Live This Nevermore.
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by givingin on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:38:41 AM AEST
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Very good !
You have a good talent.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Dear God, I Will Live This Nevermore.
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by butterbuns on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:10:45 AM AEST
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Wow. Awesome write.
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