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Can I a ford to fear
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:25:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Truth is like a slender blade of grass Time itself can turn time around Everyone needs a smile Hurtful though this world outside maybe I am still glad I am alive
Others, no many I know have Nothing The ones that DO Don't know what they got My heart sobs for each simple tale about a gentle soul Each lost soul who crosses over into our lives.
Un aware how we were meant to meet perhap by Fate or by things we read,see and do
Old souls gather Did you know Gentle eyes and Little boy dreams Lost then and even now by a lack of a Mothers kiss Little boy lost still and forever seems to be*
Pray, believe that my love and outstretched hand is enuff It's not Its a lie your in denial
Help me The world and its dealings are driving me mad
Help and Hinderance , is that what I am really influence I haven't any But I can't help but keep trying With as many Lost souls I can
My way the only way the only way I know how
I will continue to Live , watch and see how life will continue to be Whisper
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Whisper
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2004-11-17 20:25:21] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Can I a ford to fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by nightrider on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:40:25 PM AEST (User
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its so gentle... and i dunno... graceful?
your word choice made it a beautiful read.
thanks for sharing it.
cheers.
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Re: Can I a ford to fear
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:49:40 PM AEST (User
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This was such a calming, truthful read and it just kinda puts u into a very..gentle state of mind. Beautifully done. I'm honestly at a loss for words trying to describe what this poem made me feel. |
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