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Beautiful
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:34:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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looking down on you
each breath
further and further apart
As I sink my teeth into your wrist
The blood fills my mouth
I feel weightless
caught as if by a dance
but just as quick as it started
Its gone
your heart now
coming to a stop
I step back
look upon your beauty
you are just as beautiful
as when you were alive
if not more
a look of peace on your face
brings a smile to mine
with that final thought
I take flight once more
looking for
my next hit
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2004-11-17 20:34:40]
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Re: Beautiful
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:24:06 PM AEST
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that was awesome! I really liked it a lot! It brought a smile to my face for some reason =)
Great writing, keep it up!
God bless |
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