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Love Diminished
Contributed by
sunshiny
on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:33:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I feel you with me
Your hands caress my cheek
I long to be free
Oh, why can't you see?
Your love is all that I seek
I see all the signs
Everything's always the same
Your lips graze mine
One last time
And you're off and running again
My heart and soul
Given to you
I long to be whole
My independence you stole
I just don't know what to do
Priorities are laid
Since you're never here
The price that I've paid
All the promises made
Along comes my greatest fear
Now I'm alone
Peaceful at last
Nothing will condone
Things that were shown
But now it's all part of the past
Copyright ©
sunshiny
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2004-11-18 01:33:17]
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Re: Love Diminished
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:10:44 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, painted with feelings..colored in emotions discriptions..enjoyed the poem you have shared from your heart. |
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Re: Love Diminished
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:08:18 AM AEST
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Wonderful write...filled with emotions.... Thank you for sharing..and welcome to YPDC.
Hope to see more of your work...
Jenni |
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