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Saddend little girl
Contributed by
givingin
on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:40:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She was a child,
full of hate,
she never cried,
this was her fate.
She tried to live,
but could not see,
her life was done,
she could not breath.
Her life was full,
of hate and pain,
her life messed up,
she was to blame.
They hated her,
for being dark,
her scar of pain,
was her mark.
She tore her flesh,
with a blade,
she hated the life,
she had made.
So there she sat,
as she bled,
her arm beside her,
on her bed.
The people so cruel,
their impact was great,
her eyes slowly closed,
as she embraced her fate.
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givingin
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2004-11-18 07:40:59]
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Re: Saddend little girl
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:49:32 AM AEST
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a very emotionally charged write, very sad,
*hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Saddend little girl
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by tigger on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:55:08 AM AEST
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suicide is so plainly vain just cannot contain
all your pain ur wrist is slain as blood runs
down just rember there is some one out there |
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