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Beautiful Pain
Contributed by
Red_October
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:37:23 AM in AEST
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Beautiful pain ~ Vivid emotive and torturous divine
Tears, as they drop, disappear in my wine
As you kiss me, you taste the desperate need
and the fever of agony that my body bleeds
Iridescent screams are quelled beneath skin
in the stain of confinement when I contain it within
The happiness could kill me as it fills my desire
and the beauty that lingers will surely expire
In my imaginary universe where scars shine like stars
the most beautiful thing is a tragedy like ours
And the need for extraordinary leaves a lonely void
in the place where my heart was almost destroyed
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by alexb on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:47:27 AM AEST
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| this poem is amazing! it sounds so proffesional. keep up the good work |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:47:44 AM AEST
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aww very sad, emotional and written beautifully,
pixie xx |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by tigger on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:40:20 AM AEST
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| hey,
love it so pro
keep it up |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:45:24 AM AEST
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| Wow! great write! Touches on so much, and is able to take on an individual meaning for all who read it. It did for me anyways. I love this! |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:00:13 AM AEST
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Took my breath away! Oh, you have described this to perfection!
Stitch |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:27:37 AM AEST
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| wow... that last stanza is incredible! this is a wonderful read. |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:34:00 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful.
loved the last two lines of the first verse.
amazing, keep it up! |
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Re: Beautiful Pain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:35:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful work. I really liked it! |
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