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Trying to Find Ourselves...
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:26:44 AM in AEST
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Inside ourselves
We find what is hidden
What we are not meant to know
Who our true selves are hiding in blue
Sealed up tightly
Suffocating
Driving a knife through
Our breaking hears
Instead of our bent backs
Cracking from old age
We have bleeding hearts
Filled with holes
Slowly dying
As we try to find ourselves
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Re: Trying to Find Ourselves...
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:28:29 AM AEST
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| short and packed with meaning. I liked it very, very much. |
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Re: Trying to Find Ourselves...
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by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:05:58 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this poem very well, I'm still trying to find myself...well short and too the point very well written keep on posting |
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Re: Trying to Find Ourselves...
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by kaleidoscope_glasses on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:20:12 AM AEST
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so very well written..............
-megan (kaleidoscope_glasses) |
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