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When I Go
Contributed by
Mangs
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:14:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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When I go,
The world shall know,
That I came...
Like a comet,
Hit the earth,
Made a loud explosion,
And left a dent,
Before I went...
Copyright ©
Mangs
... [
2004-11-18 12:14:22]
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Re: When I Go
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:53:30 PM AEST
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such a cool lil lymric.
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Re: When I Go
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:26:46 PM AEST
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a great, little write,
pixie xx |
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Re: When I Go
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 12:31:32 PM AEST
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so short but VERY powerful. This was an excellent write, keep it up.
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