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**Don't You Dare!**
Contributed by
Catalina
on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:44:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dont you dare,
I am not your prize
Angry words fly,
Your true colors arise
Back away from the flame,
No mercy will show
Dont you dare place the blame
Have you no soul
Within there was not love,
But the truest hate
You left me alone,
Dont you dare say its fate
Enraged emotions consume me
I am no ones trophy
Sitting there waiting,
For when you want to hold me
Isnt there more,
To be held not had
To be loved not shoved,
Dont you dare feel bad
Its only the guilt you cant stand
Being alone with no trophy in your hand
It was real & it was here
Your selfishness sealed this deal
Copyright ©
Catalina
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2004-11-18 13:44:51]
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Re: **Don't You Dare!**
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by arden on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:58:22 PM AEST
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this poem packed a punch. very awesome write. good rhyme. very well done.
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Re: **Don't You Dare!**
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:34:19 PM AEST
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| Good write. I was there a few years ago so I know how it feels. It may hurt to stand up but it is better for you to do so. |
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Re: **Don't You Dare!**
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:53:46 PM AEST
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| Great write..I've been there too and it's hard..emotional blackmail is another thing they manage with dexterous skill.. creepos. |
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Re: **Don't You Dare!**
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:25:01 PM AEST
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a brill write, powerful and hard hitting,
pixie xx |
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