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Indelible
Contributed by
sunshiny
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:55:27 PM in AEST
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You are etched in my memory like a single star, glowing in the charcoal sky.
One moment can last a lifetime and remain imprinted on my soul.
Exhilaration invades me as I think of us and our imminent future together.
One word from your lips makes each and every day euphoric.
I anticipate the profound acclamation I feel each time you say " I love you."
You will be embedded in my heart for eternity.....
My love for you, indelible.....
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sunshiny
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2004-11-18 15:55:27]
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Re: Indelible
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:02:16 PM AEST
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Strong and resonant, as well as resident . . . not exactly indelible, but a good extrapolation of the word into an emotion we are all subject to.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Indelible
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by sunshiny on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:38:54 PM AEST
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| Indelible means impossible to remove or erase. Or, unable to be forgotten;memorable. I figure my love was this way, which is why I chose indelible. Thanks for your comment! |
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Re: Indelible
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 03:46:45 PM AEST
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| so many big words, i just loved it! lol honestly though i enjoyed the fact that you were so descriptive and I really learned new words by reading this poem, something I cant say for too many of them. Great write |
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Re: Indelible
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by xMizeriex on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:19:55 AM AEST
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Strong and powerful poetry.
Well done, keep writing.
Bx |
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