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Would tomorrow shine brighter
Contributed by
Am
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:55:46 PM in AEST
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If tomorrow didn't shine as bright as today
If your hopes for the world weren't so cliche'
If I didn't get up and walk away
If we appologized without delay
If my feelings weren't out on display
Would tomorrow shine brighter than today?
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2004-11-18 15:55:46]
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Re: Would tomorrow shine brighter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:00:04 PM AEST
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Seems almost rhetorical. The moderators can spell apologized properly, fear not.
Nice little read here.
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Re: Would tomorrow shine brighter
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by Am on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:03:01 PM AEST
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thanx for pointing that out neptune....i guess i should have taken a better look over it sorry guys
~Always,
Am~ |
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