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could i
Contributed by
amatt
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:26:15 PM in AEST
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could i be the hero
or maybe the bystander
could i be the savior
or maybe the life taker
could i be the smartest
or maybe the least intellegent
could i be the next one
or maybe the last one
could i be the free one
or maybe the enslaved one
could i be the alive one
id rather be the dead one
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2004-11-18 19:26:15]
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Re: could i
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by Twitch06 on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:29:01 PM AEST
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| i dont think it sucks.. u put forth good effort in this, great job |
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Re: could i
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:56:14 PM AEST
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great job .. very well expressed .. i enjoyed reading this ..
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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