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Misery
Contributed by
GothicHollie
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Living a life that is so Empty
Tried everything to Fill that Hole
Yet you remained empty as always
And you realized that in you lies no Soul
So you give up all you dreams
Trade in everything you onced believed In
Do what was once unthinkable
Yes, now you live in Sin
Your conscience has gone numb
You can't take much More
You'll never see the light of god
You've turned into a Whore
As if that weren't enought
Your younger sister catches your Eye
Shes headed down that same road of perdition
Now you realize you deserve to Die
Your poison has destroyed all those around you
Even the one you swore to Protect
As you suffer your unbearable misery
Your emptyness is finally filled with nothing more than Regret
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GothicHollie
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2004-11-18 20:13:40]
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Re: Misery
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:19:25 PM AEST
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| very dark-- nice rhyming * |
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Re: Misery
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by secretwind on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:00:29 AM AEST
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| Shadows call to me as I read this one,Well done. |
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Re: Misery
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by Always on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:09:21 PM AEST
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| Crap man, that hits you in the gut eh! *s*, thanx for the read. |
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Re: Misery
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:12:26 PM AEST
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| chilling. |
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Re: Misery
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by Inevitable on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:43:47 PM AEST
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| That's dark Hollie |
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Re: Misery
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by spirit_of_dark_tears on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:47:06 AM AEST
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dark as crimsons stone it self your poem seems to feed of my mind were all doomed to die you call apon the shadows
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Re: Misery
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:14:56 PM AEST
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| Great dark write. |
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