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Hush
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:26:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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there it goes again soft at first, then with a harder more angry push into the skin to take my pain away i stifle out one stray cry as I pull the line farther down my skin it whispers to me harder, longer, then soft, not too short its controlling me as I speak the only way I know how to relax is to hurt myself in a way no one can comprehend my wounds are pink at first then a puddle forms a soft velvety red pours down my skin dripping ever so softly in a sychronized fashion first the top cut then the bottom all the way down my arm its painless and calming one way to forget what the day has put me through slowly now I pull the blade back and release my thoughts my shoulders sink into a relaxed state I wipe away the blood that has strayed down my arm slide my blade back into its hiding spot goodnight little blade sleep tight until tomorrow night when we meet again
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Re: Hush
(User Rating: 1 ) by YerfDawg on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:43:34 PM AEST (User
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Hmm...intresting. I always found that cutting yourself leads to more attention than relaxation. The poem was cool. But if you are a cutter, might I suggest a healthier way of dealing with stress? Running, walking, swimming, SOMETHING that is more constructive than cutting. Now, that said, I am going to go for a run... |
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Re: Hush
(User Rating: 1 ) by humboldthunny17 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:59:11 PM AEST (User
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YERFDOG, I agree. HEY HUMBOLDT-- I thought ur blade was thrown away!!! Where'd you get another one? U need to stop, or u gonna end up in the hospital like Lexxxy |
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