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Empty
Contributed by
JennyB
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:26:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You lost me years ago
And so I let go
You are my sickness that slowly seeps in my brain with each spoken word
A disease that spreads throughout my body
What about you?
Its always about you
What about me?
Why cant you just see what you are doing to me?
I just hope your traits are not genetic
I dont want to spread this disease any further
Death is the only antidote
Copyright ©
JennyB
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2004-11-19 12:26:08]
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Re: Empty
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by taryn on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 02:18:30 PM AEST
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| very deep. Great write! |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 02:28:52 PM AEST
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Powerful and emotional. Very well written
Take Care
- Becca |
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