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Change The World Someday
Contributed by
Am
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 02:47:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Everyday-same as the last
Always run into things that remind me of the past
I wouldn't want to reminisce
But I know these thoughts I can't dismiss
Being a young girl, only 14
Life doesn't always look so pristine
So when I wanna get up and run away
I think of how I want to change the world someday
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Am
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2004-11-19 14:47:45]
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Re: Change The World Someday
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by mysticpoet on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 03:02:29 PM AEST
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Hello Am
You are a good writer, Loved your poem.
Yes it's true, at 14, life doesn't always look that great--but it does get better-- I bet you are one that CAN change the world and make things better--keep writing |
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Re: Change The World Someday
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by redtempest13 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:30:31 PM AEST
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Very good...I think a lot of ppl have felt that way at some point.....I know I did...and still do sometimes. Keep writing. You're good at it.
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