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Thanks
Contributed by
Red_October
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Found myself thinking up ways to make
excuses, to need you around, to see your face,
to hear you breathe, to enter your space...
Listened to songs all night long
but couldn't adjust to you being gone,
rather - not here in the first place,
not here ever, but like vapor
your presence would wander thru me and my nightmares,
visions, inhaled like dusty rhythms
put away...I chased those thoughts around for awhile,
I dropped a tear, I displaced a smile
that passed by when I sat down to write this,
feeling discomfort that was nothing like this
desire to feed fire of lust
outgrown when kisses were enough
to sustain the burn of being away
and you on the horizon melted the stress at the end of the day
and kept me going when I was mostly insane - so thanks.
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Red_October
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2004-11-19 16:03:39]
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Re: Thanks
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:21:01 PM AEST
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Clevrly written.
You have a good sense of description and wording.
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