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A Seasons Gift
Contributed by
matt73
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Haunted seasons of naked embrace
desire danced bare in the snow
burried truth of hollow smiles
anguish begged to grow
the ghost of spring laid beneath the sun
tasted the sunlights joy
cried it's recoiled fears to the moon
gave a poet a soul.
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2004-11-19 16:16:26]
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Re: A Seasons Gift
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 03:06:49 AM AEST
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tears again, but tears of joy..such beauty is in this poem...the ghost of spring laid beneath the sun
tasted the sunlights joy
cried it's recoiled fears to the moon
gave a poet a soul.
that line kidnapped my breath..it's wonderful..sigh!!! |
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Re: A Seasons Gift
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 03:43:47 PM AEST
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| You got so much down in so little space, it really added to the complexity of what u were saying. I really enjoyed this poem, nice work! |
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Re: A Seasons Gift
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:43:53 PM AEST
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| this definantly deserves more comments and reads. |
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